S2E3: Form, Content, and Tamales

Community Open Mic Airs August 30th

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Theme: Transitions

Editorial Decisions: Cherry and Plum Blossoms

Read the latest blog post here: https://culinarysaijiki.com/2023/07/12/editorial-decisions-cherry-and-plum-blossoms/

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This season, I am welcoming both podcast guests and guest bloggers. If you’re interested in joining one or both, visit ⁠https://culinarysaijiki.com/join-the-conversation/ ⁠for details.

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Theme Music

“J’attendrai” by Django Reinhardt, performing at Cleveland Music Hall, 1939. This recording is in the public domain. Hear the whole song at https://clevelandhistorical.org/files/show/6045.

Editorial Decisions: Cherry and Plum Blossoms

As I’ve mentioned before, the end goal of this project is to produce a food-related saijiki in the spirit of William J. Higginson’s Haiku World: An International Poetry Almanac. That means producing a print book (and because it’s the 21st century, an ebook) that people can use as a reference to guide their personal haiku practice. Although that end goal is still a long way off, I recently found myself having to make my first major editorial decision.

As I’ve been gathering poems to use for the blog, podcast, and eventual book manuscript, I felt that cherry blossom haiku were getting added in every other entry. It wasn’t long in my collecting before plum blossoms began to follow suit. It got to the point where the issue of balance became a concern. Ultimately, after some research and consideration, I decided to stop collecting cherry and plum blossom references. 

First, I learned through my research that the fruit on the Japanese cherry tree is so sour that it’s not generally considered edible. Now, with haiku a global poetry phenomenon, it’s reasonable to assume that someone would write about the blossoms of an edible species at some point. But it’s safe to say that much of what has already been written is about a species of tree we cannot eat. If this is a project focused on what is edible, collecting haiku about a fruit generally too sour for human consumption is not a good use of time and energy. If someone is clearly writing about an edible varietal, I can make an exception. While this first point does not apply to plum blossoms, it was nonetheless useful for me to think through when deciding what to include and what to exclude.

Second, the sheer number of cherry blossom and plum blossom haiku was threatening to overtake all the other categories in the project. If the ultimate goal is to create a manuscript that creates as much balance as possible between seasons, types of food, and world cultures, continuing to add to my already-prodigious blossom collection wasn’t actually going to be helpful. Yes, hard drives are technically limitless at this point, especially for a text-based book project. But there’s no point in collecting something beyond its usefulness. Time is also a factor. I love doing this project. I also work full-time, am trying to build a business, serve on the HSA executive committee, and want to spend time with my partner, my friends, my dog, and my fitness. The time I have during the week to spend on The Culinary Saijiki is precious, and I don’t want to waste it transcribing hundreds of cherry and plum blossom haiku that aren’t going to serve the project as a whole.     

The completionist in me protests. I’ve obviously not collected every single cherry and plum blossom haiku ever written! How can I claim to be giving a thorough treatment to my subject matter by ignoring such an important group of haiku? And how could I rule out plum blossoms when those are edible?

Ultimately, trying to collect every single example of something is a fool’s errand. In addition, cherry blossoms and plum blossoms have already been given a thorough treatment in the haiku world. We know what season they signify. I don’t ultimately feel that I have a unique perspective on cherry and plum blossoms. They can stand on their own. They don’t need me. Beyond that, though, the fact remains that I can change my mind. If for some reason I discover that I really need to include plum blossoms (or less likely, cherry blossoms), those haiku aren’t going anywhere. They’ll be easy for me to collect should I find that a necessary endeavor.

Food, Haiku, and Your Roots: 2023 HNA Presentation

Presentation Slides

An Overview of Six Seasons: A New Way With Vegetables

Read the most recent community blog post here: https://culinarysaijiki.com/2023/06/28/an-overview-of-six-seasons-a-new-way-with-vegetables/

Join the Conversation

This season, I am welcoming both podcast guests and guest bloggers. If you’re interested in joining one or both, visit https://culinarysaijiki.com/join-the-conversation/ for details.

Support the ProjectBuy me a coffee at https://www.buymeacoffee.com/culinarysaijiki. You can also help by sharing this podcast with anyone who you think might appreciate it.Theme Music“J’attendrai” by Django Reinhardt, performing at Cleveland Music Hall, 1939. This recording is in the public domain. Hear the whole song at https://clevelandhistorical.org/files/show/6045.

An Overview of Six Seasons: A New Way with Vegetables

“The seasons don’t ever divide themselves neatly,” writes Joshua McFadden in the opening of the Early Summer chapter of Six Seasons: A New Way with Vegetables. “Spring flows into early summer in fits and starts. A week of T-shirt weather may be followed by a string of cool gray days challenging our optimism about summer’s arrival.”

Almost as soon as I began working with saijiki in my haiku practice, I struggled with the definition of seasons. The lunar-based haiku seasons didn’t correspond neatly with the Gregorian calendar under which I lived. I was living in Texas, where the seasonal expression is quite different from where I live now. And it’s true that the Earth doesn’t give us neat divisions. In the Gregorian calendar, summer has just started. In the haiku calendar, we’re in the middle of it. Two weeks ago, the last time I went to the farmer’s market, I saw an abundance of early summer (beets, potatoes) vegetables and midsummer vegetables (broccoli, cauliflower). But the early summer fennel and celery were out of season, and the summer squashes hadn’t arrived yet. I have started learning to live in the liminal space of seasons, and this book is an excellent guide for that.

Six Seasons includes the standard spring, autumn, and winter. Summer, however, is divided into three sections: early, mid, and late. Each chapter contains a few key vegetables as the centerpiece, and McFadden details how their flavors and textures change throughout the season. Not only do seasons not divide themselves evenly, but vegetables are not the same through their entire growing range. What is sweet enough to eat raw one week might be moving toward bitterness a week later, and would benefit from cooking. It might be an insult to the carrot to cook it early in the season, but doing so toward the end of its peak enhances the flavors that are starting to fade. There is no one right way to eat or cook a vegetable; that depends as much on time of year as anything else.

Over on the podcast, I’ve raved about the salad recipes I’ve tried from this book. Ultimately, though, there are two components of Six Seasons that make it more than a standard-issue cookbook:

1. It focuses on techniques and practices. To be clear, it’s not a textbook; you won’t learn fancy knife skills (and that’s probably not really something best taught in a book anyway). But McFadden sprinkles in small things that make a big difference. For example, I’ve learned that if you’re making pasta with broccoli, the best way to cook the broccoli is to throw it in for the last few minutes of the pasta cook time. That way, it gets infused with the salted, starchy water, amping up the flavor. (I also swear it makes the broccoli come out brighter, but maybe that’s a placebo effect.)

2. It reminds me that eating seasonally means surrendering control and will. For example, I’m writing this at the end of June. No matter how much I might hypothetically be craving butternut squash (really, I could just go for a good breakfast taco), there’s no way I’m going to find the requisite ingredients at the peak of freshness. Sure, I could go to a supermarket and there would probably be a butternut squash there, given the world we live in. But that doesn’t mean the squash is in great condition. If I wanted a savory squash dish, zucchini boats stuffed with sausage, cheese, and Italian seasoning would be a better menu option.

That doesn’t mean you have to somehow align your cravings with the seasons, though I think most of us do to some degree (I want more salads in the middle of summer than I do in the middle of winter). That doesn’t mean that if you indulge the hankering for the comfort of an out-of-season dish, you’re a morally inferior person. It doesn’t mean you can’t make a smoothie out of frozen berries in January, if that’s what you’re into.

What it does mean, though, is that if you really want to get in tune with the seasons, you have to relinquish expectation. Maybe you can’t wait to make roasted beets. But maybe the week you’re expecting to find them at the farmer’s market, they’re not there. Maybe three weeks goes by before they’re finally ready. Frustrating? Sure. But the fact is that we’ve been trying to bend the world to human whim for a long time now, and it’s clearly not going well.

To eat seasonally means that you can’t plan too hard. As someone who likes to rigidly plan out all her meals for the week and go shopping in one fell swoop, this was a tough lesson to learn. The farms aren’t going to yield to what my mind has decided is the most efficient or delicious. I can either change my plan on the fly, or I can make that dreaded second stop to another store to buy what I want, even if it’s not quite ripe.

To eat seasonally is to recognize that the world is so much bigger than your individual wants, and so beyond your individual control. That, I think, is the greatest lesson of Six Seasons, even if it’s not made explicit. Rather, if you make the book a guide to how you approach vegetables generally, that lesson will reveal itself over and over. Which is good, because if you’re anything like me, you’re going to need a reminder.

Season Two Introduction

In Gratitude
Thank you to Peg Cherrin-Myers and Kimberly Kuchar for the coffees they bought me this month. I am now 80% of the way to covering my hosting costs!

If you want to contribute, you can buy me a coffee here: https://www.buymeacoffee.com/culinarysaijiki

Join the Show: https://culinarysaijiki.com/join-the-conversation/

Read the Blog: https://culinarysaijiki.com/blog/(New posts start up next week!)

Haiku North America Info: http://www.haikunorthamerica.com/2023-conference.html

Books I Referenced

Six Seasons: A New Way with Vegetables by Joshua McFadden. Artisan Press, 2017. https://www.joshuamcfadden.com/sixseasons

Haiku edited by Peter Washington. Everyman’s Library Pocket Poets, 2003. https://www.penguinbookshop.com/book/9781400041282

Want to be part of Season 2?

Season 2 of The Culinary Saijiki launches on March 20th. In addition to three community blog posts and three open mic episodes, I have a list of fun topics related to classical haiku. And there’s plenty of opportunity for fellow haijin to get involved.

First, I am ready to start recording podcast guests for the new season. If you are interested in talking about classical haiku and how it relates to food, fill out the form here: https://forms.gle/7JP69qWfFf52ZfE37. Not sure what you want to discuss, but still want to be on the podcast? Fill it out anyway! I have some options for you to pick from.

Second, I would like to welcome guest bloggers for season two. If you would like to write a guest post related to the season two focus, fill out this form: https://forms.gle/smjAHvqdS3Tz38KYA. I can’t wait to see your ideas!

And for those of you who are wondering . . . Yes, you can write a guest post and be on the podcast!

I look forward to hearing from you and sharing your ideas as part of this project!

Mark Scott: Haiku, Food, and the Micro-Seasons

More about Mark Scott
Learn more about the micro-seasons at https://naturalistweekly.com/.
Support Naturalist Weekly: https://www.buymeacoffee.com/naturalistCFind Naturalist Weekly on Instagram at: https://www.instagram.com/naturalistweekly/

Harvest Time
Read the most recent community blog post at: https://culinarysaijiki.com/2022/12/04/bonus-post-community-harvest/

Join the Conversation
Season 2 will focus on food as it appears on classical haiku. If you would like to be on a Season 2 podcast episode, or write a guest post on this topic, contact me at allyson@allysonwhipple.com.

Support the Project
Buy me a coffee at https://www.buymeacoffee.com/culinarysaijiki. You can also help by sharing this podcast with anyone who you think might appreciate it.

Theme Music
“J’attendrai” by Django Reinhardt, performing at Cleveland Music Hall, 1939. This recording is in the public domain. Hear the whole song at https://clevelandhistorical.org/files/show/6045.

Bonus Post: Community Harvest

Talk about a cornucopia of poetry! For this bonus post, people took me up on my offer of multiple forms. I received not only haiku, but also tanka and tan-renga, and submissions came from three different continents!

It was a delight to put this post together over the course of a cold winter afternoon, drinking multiple cups of tea. I hope you enjoy the creative bounty as much as I did.


In Deb Koen’s first haiku, the second and third lines display a masterful example of double meaning, reinforcing the sense of abundance that comes from a harvest. The produce features an array of colors; each of these colors was produced by, and harvested from, the planet itself. The second sense of meaning comes from the range of colors available at a produce market. The color range among the harvested crops is expansive; every shade of the planet is represented here. We have not just an abundance of physical nourishment, but a feast of delights for the eyes as well.

every color
from earth

Deb Koen, USA. This haiku originally appeared in Haiku Canad Review, Winter 2020.
vegetables stall
Photo by PhotoMIX Company on Pexels.com

In the second haiku, Koen associates the comfort that both food and music can provide. For most people, comfort foods are rich and hearty. What makes them comforting is not just their heartiness. but also their familiarity. Just as delicious food prepared with care gets passed around a holiday table, an LP of comforting music rotates not just in physical space, but in and out of the listener’s consciousness. In this haiku I see abundance (hearty comfort food) and celebration (food being passed around the table), but I also wonder if this poem is about a meal taking place after a funeral: the food comforts the grieving, and the music brings back good memories of the departed loved one.

comfort food
circling the table
a Beatles LP

Deb Koen, USA. This haiku originally appeared in Frogpond 44:2.


Hassane Zemmouri’s first tanka gives us an image of a child’s joy at harvesting berries. There are two bounties: the fruit off the vine, and the experience of watching a child’s face light up. This poem reinforces the concept that food is not just physical nourishment. The connections we make to the land, and to each other, through the processes of harvesting, cooking, and eating, shine through in this brief work.

picking season-
the full basket doesn’t accommodate
the girl’s joy
her smile more delicious
than the expected jam

Arabic translation:

Hassane Zemmouri, Algeria. This tanka originally appeared in Take5, Issue 3.
clear glass mason jars
Photo by Pixabay on Pexels.com

Hassane’s second tanka reminds me of picking apples with my nephew this fall. Our neighbors have an apple tree, but weren’t interested in harvesting the fruit. My nephew and I went out with an apple picker and got as many as we could. When he was concerned about bruised or spotted apples, I reminded him of what his great-grandmother believed: that the ugly apples make the best applesauce. After harvesting the apples, my partner turned them into applesauce, and saved the peels to make jelly. I appreciate Hassane’s tanka because it illustrates so well how a short poem can awaken a beloved memory in a stranger half a world away.

end of picking-
the mother chooses the bruised apples
for jam
children dream
of candy apples

French translation:

fin de cueillette-
la mère choisit les pommes meurtries
pour la confiture
les enfants rêvent
de pommes d’amour

Arabic translation:

Hassane Zemmouri, Algeria


In their first tan-renga, Christina Chin and Uchechukwu Onyedikam magnify the sense of celebration that often comes at harvest time. Glass Gem corn originates in Oklahoma, and was developed by a farmer named Carl Barnes. It took him many years to collect the seeds and cross-breed the corn he found to create the vivid, translucent kernels we see today. It’s a rare breed of corn, and in this tanka, I see a celebration of the ingenuity and patience required to cultivate heirloom stock. Because rainbows are also associated with the queer community, I think that this tanka implies the marriage of queer farmers, a portion of the population that often gets overlooked. (You can read more about that at NPR.)

close up shot of yams
Photo by Daniel Dan on Pexels.com

stripping husks
from glass gem corn
an heirloom
of rainbow colours
farmer kisses farmer

Christina Chin, Malaysia, and Uchechukwu Onyedikam, Nigeria

The New Yam Festival is a celebration that takes place in Kogi state, Nigeria. It celebrates the farming season, as well as community and culture of of the Igbo people. It typically falls at the end of August or beginning of September, depending on when the first new yams appear. This tan-renga reminds me that while many holidays and festivals have set dates, the Earth does not follow the human-made calendar to the exact day. The world releases its bounty on its own time.

New Yam Festival
the Igbo people dig
into the ridges
end of rainy

Uchechukwu Onyedikam, Nigeria and Christina Chin, Malaysia

In their first tan-renga, Christina Chin and Linda Ludwig present a wintry scene warmed by delicious food and intimacy. While crabbing season varies by region, in much of the world, it starts in late autumn and ends in mid to late winter. While moonless nights happen all year long, there’s something about the darkness of winter that makes the lack of moon in this poem feel more potent. Yet the crabs, being in season, are juicy and delicious. I interpret a sensuality in this poem not just from the word “succulent,” but also because in some parts of the world, shellfish are considered an aphrodisiac. Regardless of whether or not I’m correct, there is still a delightful coziness in this tan-renga.

the traps
heavy with crabs
river with no moon
succulent dinner
for two

Christina Chin, Malaysia, and Linda Ludwig, USA

This final tan-renga contains historical allusions, illustrating the ways in which food is bound up in culture both past and present. The Silk Road existed as a network for traders exchanging goods between Asia and Europe, between 130 B.C.E. and 1453 C.E. Commodities included textiles, animals, and of course, foods and spices. The gogi berry comes from a shrub native to China, and long been used in both Chinese and Korean cooking and medicine. Today, people in the western world can find gogi berry tea sold as an alternative health product. What started as an indigenous ingredient is now a decontextualized commodity. Nonetheless, we can connect to the image of gogi berry and ginger blended into a simple tea, and imagine the connection the drinker might feel to generations past.

ripe grapes on branch on white surface in sunlight
Photo by Angelica Ospino Laguna on Pexels.com

the silk road
old world treasures
chi tea
a hot concoction
of goji berry ginger

Linda Ludwig, USA and Christina Chin, Malaysia


Thanks to everyone who contributed poems to this special post. I look forward to blogging again in 2023! For now, may you have a peaceful close of the year.

Jerome Berglund: Wishbone’s Sharp Crack

In Gratitude
Thanks to Peter Schmidt for buying me 5 coffees this month! I’m now 48% of the way to having my web hosting covered for the year. If you want to contribute financially, visit https://www.buymeacoffee.com/culinarysaijiki. Contributors get a bonus recipe every month!

November Community Blog Post
I’m putting together another community blog post (view the May community post here).
Theme: Harvest
Deadline: 11:59 p.m. CST on Wednesday, November 23rd
Submission Form: https://forms.gle/TxZWqf3zbfi1i9uR8
Notes: Haiku  in languages other than English are welcome; please provide a  translation. Experimental haiku are also welcome. If sending previously  published haiku, remember to provide publication credit.

More from Jerome Berglund
Buy Jerome’s haiku collection: https://www.amazon.com/Dog-Days-Jerome-William-Berglund/dp/B09P3WTCQYHaiku and senryu from Fevers of the Mind: https://feversofthemind.com/2022/08/11/a-few-haiku-and-senryu-style-from-jerome-berglund/Four haiku in Dark Winter Literary Journal: https://www.darkwinterlit.com/post/4-haiku-by-jerome-berglundThree haiga from Ice Floe Press: https://icefloepress.net/three-haiga-jerome-berglund/Three haiga in Lothlorein Poetry Journal: https://lothlorienpoetryjournal.blogspot.com/2022/04/three-haiga-poems-by-jerome-berglund.html

Winter Updates
To read about my 2022 reflections and plans for 2023, read the newest blog post: https://culinarysaijiki.com/2022/11/13/the-season-for-reflection-and-rest/

Theme Music
“J’attendrai” by Django Reinhardt,  performing at Cleveland Music Hall, 1939. This recording is in  the public domain. Hear the whole song at https://clevelandhistorical.org/files/show/6045.

The Season for Reflection and Rest

First, thanks to Peter Schmidt for buying me 5 coffees this month! I’m now 48% of the way to having my web hosting covered for the year.

Second, remember to send work for the Community Bonus Post at the end of the month. That will be the last blog post for 2022! Send your work via the Google Form by 11:59 pm CST on Wednesday, November 23rd.

When I started this project in the spring, I had no idea what shape it was going to take. Like many of my creative pursuits, I dove in headfirst, making it up as I went along, knowing I’d figure it out along the way. I’m also grateful that the blog and podcast have allowed me to stay connected to my creativity through a tumultuous second half of 2022, including a cross-country move, buying a house, and changing jobs twice. Moving in October, I felt the call to take a break. I wrote recently to a group of friends that, for most of my adult life, I’ve felt the desire to put life on pause from October through the new year. And pretty much every year, I’ve ignored that, pressuring myself to keep up with the pace of life I keep during the sunnier, warmer months. This year, though, I’m trying to honor that impulse. So I’m taking today to serve as a way to reflect on the project so far, and what my plans are for the future.

The Blog

On this site, I’ve experimented with a few different types of posts. My focus is sharing haiku others have written, along with my own commentary. Sometimes I focus on a specific type of food; sometimes I focus on a specific season; sometimes the post is more conceptual. I haven’t nailed down one specific approach because different ideas inspire different structures. That being said, I think I would like to maintain a more consistent structure in the future, and one of the things I’ll be doing during my project hiatus is considering the shape I want future posts to take. It’s hard to be in that planning mode when you’re in creation mode, so I’m looking forward to stepping back, letting my mind go fallow, and seeing what emerges. If there are particular structures or approaches that appeal to you, let me know in the comments!

I also enjoyed putting together the May community blog post, and am excited to be reading haiku for the November post as well. I’m considering making this a regular feature next year, either quarterly or every other month. If you have a preference, please let me know! While I ultimately have to shape this project around what works with the rest of my life, I also do want to know what interests people who read this blog.

The Podcast

Since launching the podcast in June, I’ve learned some of the basics of Garageband, finally settled on a theme song, and even experimented with different kinds of episodes. I modeled the show after long-form, open-conversation podcasts, which are the kind I most enjoy listening to. However, I also did one solo episode, and was surprised to find how much fun I had making it! And just as I enjoy doing the community blog posts, I loved putting the community open mic bonus podcast together. If I decided to make community blog posts every other month, I might do that for podcasts as well. Odd-numbered months could have a community blog post, and even-numbered months could have a community open mic. This idea is still percolating; I’ll see how it takes root during my hiatus.

The Future

The main thing I want to do during my creative break is take time to get organized. I’ve collected over 200 haiku at this point, and while my organization system on the whole is pretty solid, ever since buying and setting up the house, I haven’t done a great job keeping track of which haiku I have already used on the blog and podcast. I’m honestly excited to take a weekend afternoon and get everything reorganized.

I also want to put together the foundation for an eventual print manuscript. While I don’t imagine putting a print book together until at least 2024, the time to get organized is now. That means setting up a Scrivener file especially for the book project, getting a basic organizing scheme in place, and importing relevant blog or podcast content that I might want to revisit. While I know that a project of this length is going to evolve over time, giving myself a structure now will set me up for an easier time down the road.

In addition to the community blog post at the end of the month, I have two more podcast episodes lined up, and then I’m officially on hiatus until January. I hope you have a restful and creatively fulfilling winter season.

Huge thanks to everyone who has read this blog, commented on posts, and supported this project. It means a great deal to me that there are people interested in the work I’m doing here. I’m excited for what this project will yield in the new year.